Week 8 Comments and Feedback

The comments that help me the most are the problems with my grammar. Since I am much more of a logical/math mind I have a hard time seeing issues in my writing even when reading aloud. Having people tell me what the issues really help. I think my feedback is pretty decent. I am not very good at helping with the structure of the story, but I think I bring good creative advice and what should be expanded on by the writer. I don't really think I could say I have learned much about people. I am not an online guy and make my connections with people much better face to face. I'm happy with my blog, but for me at least I find it very hard to give your life's story on paper or even explain the nuance of how you are as a person. I need to work on my grammar going forward, and I wouldn't change anything about my intro or comment wall.



A cat on a tree


The reason I like this image is because I don't have the best writing skills, but I have been able to think more creatively. I have really pushed my writing and hope to get better even if I am imperfect at writing and grammar.

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