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Week 8 progress

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I am happy with my progress. I'm glad I have an A. This will be my first A in college hopefully. I like the story assignments. I have used some extra credit. Things have gone well. Hopefully me at the end of the semester!

Week 8 Comments and Feedback

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The comments that help me the most are the problems with my grammar. Since I am much more of a logical/math mind I have a hard time seeing issues in my writing even when reading aloud. Having people tell me what the issues really help. I think my feedback is pretty decent. I am not very good at helping with the structure of the story, but I think I bring good creative advice and what should be expanded on by the writer. I don't really think I could say I have learned much about people. I am not an online guy and make my connections with people much better face to face. I'm happy with my blog, but for me at least I find it very hard to give your life's story on paper or even explain the nuance of how you are as a person. I need to work on my grammar going forward, and I wouldn't change anything about my intro or comment wall. A  cat on a tree The reason I like this image is because I don't have the best writing skills, but I have been able to think more crea...

Week 8 Reading and Writing

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I am happy with how my blog and website look, but I want to come up with a new title for my portfolio. I have been brainstorming but can't think of anything as of right now. I think my stories are pretty good as of right now. I have updated my grammar though. I am not the best writer or proofreader so that is definitely a skill I can get better at. Words just seem to make sense in my head, but to other people, the sentence doesn't make a lot of sense so I am trying to get better at that. I am happy with my blog and project because I think I have gotten better at writing and my stories are better than they were at the start. I think my story 1 for my website is my best accomplishment. It was pretty well written and pretty long. I usually have a hard time being creative in writing, so I tried to push my self with the story. I haven't really enjoyed the reading, but I do like the battle chapters. Yes, the notes have made writing the post much easier. I try to read more like a ...